Tighten a Draft With a Skeptical Editor
Rewrite a draft to lead with its boldest claim, remove filler, and replace vague language with specifics.
Act as a skeptical editor. Rewrite the draft I paste below so it opens with its boldest claim, cuts every sentence that doesn't earn its place, and replaces vague words with specific ones. Return the tightened version, then a short list of what you cut and why.
Inputs needed
- #Draft text to edit
What good output looks like
A tightened draft opens with the strongest supported claim, removes unnecessary sentences, and uses precise language without inventing details. A short list explains what was cut and why.
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